Good Morning, Everyone!
You have just spent about 30 minutes looking over each other's work and taking notes on what has impressed you about, what you like about it, and what you learned from it.
Please write a comment to this post that includes:
1. All of the people's work that you saw and your thoughts about each one. Use complete sentences, proper punctuation, and all of that.
2. What you did for an assignment (summary or newspaper article) and what you learned from it or why you enjoyed doing it.
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i thought alexes was funny long and good everything
ReplyDeleteTaylor did a newspaper artical.and here's what I have to say I in some places it was kinda hard to understand what she was trying to say. Amanda did a newsletter it was very clear and essay to understand what was going on. Brittnay's needed alot more work before it is done. Dj did the Medusa paper it had spelling mistakes.but it was essay to understand. Alex did the newsletter and it was very amusing.i did the news letter and what i learned from it was what happened on the bus and why he attacked the "Three Furies."
ReplyDeleteBrandon: you had a very well researched paper but you could of had more history put into it.
ReplyDeleteELI: THe newspaper was very well written but you could have left out the invisibility part.
Nick: you need more history about medusa and facts.
Joanie: it was very well written I really saw no flaws.
Amanda: It was very well written but you may have to look over your wording a little.
Nick-Add more information and spend more time on it. Also the first sentence is confusing.
ReplyDeleteD.J.-I didn't really understand it and i didn't see the story. Just make it less confusing.
Brittney-You need more information. There was hardly anything there.
Kaitlyn-It was confusing and the grammar was pretty bad. Also how were you able to interview or find out what percy and his friends were saying in the bus.
Brandon-It was actually really good. It was short but to the point an d easily understandable.
I did the newspaper article and not only was i able to more fully understand the scene but also how little the humans must see even when things are right in font of them.
I thaught alaxs was realy good he had a good amount of words and i liked the way he said things in his artical.
ReplyDeleteIn amandas she has very good detail and realy stood out.
Elis was very good my favriot part was 1-800-snitch
taylors was very good and looked pritty much finished.
katlins had alot of detail and was good.
brittney her was very short because she wasent done but the pics were cool
ReplyDeleteeli was was very good and long and mostly every thing was right
kaytlen long and would have been cooler if had more pictures.
taylors was good long but it had the same picure over and over
I did a medusa researched paper the one thing i learned is that medusa had sister and they were called the gorgons.
ReplyDeletekatlyin- it was very exciting and it just looks like an newspaper. Good Job !!
ReplyDeleteHad lots of fun and the project was easy
looking at all the work i think that people did a good job but some people could have put a little. More words and maybe put different pictures instead of 3 of the same pictures but other than that i think that every one did a good job.
ReplyDeleteReeve did a newspaper article, and it was pretty short, with not a lot of info. Taylor also did a newspaper article, and it looked like a real newspaper. It also told the story really well. Could have had more detail. Eli did a article, and it was funny, good, and a lot like an article. katlylins's could have had more detail and it didn't make sense. Amamdas was good but short.
ReplyDeleteOlivia-news report- The information was thought out and was clear.
ReplyDeleteNick-Medusa-Was good but you could have put more time into it.
DJ-Medusa-Had a lot of effort but a little confusing.
Brittney-new report- could have had more effort.
Eli- Was very good information and had a lot of details. It was also very funny.(1-800-SNITCH)
Dj did a Medusa paragraph, and i thought that his paragraph could use a little work,his information was short but i did learn that she was a beautiful woman.
ReplyDeleteEli did a newspaper article, and he used good grammar,i thought i was reading a newspaper.
Alex did a newspaper article, he made it seem funny and the facts were easy to follow.
Brittney did a newspaper article,it was very short, wasn't very detailed at all, and the quotes weren't realistic.
Taylor did a newspaper article, her info was fun but realistic at the same time.
Alex did a newspaper article, and it had a bunch of run-on sentences, but the picture fit the story well.
ReplyDeleteJoanie had a Medusa paper, and it had good, interesting information and the links where she found the information.
Olivia did a newspaper article, and the title was good, the pictures were good, the information was very good, the witness statements were good, and the layout was nice.
Amanda also did another newspaper article, and it had a good title, and a good layout, but there could have been a teeny bit more information.
DJ did a a Medusa paper, and it had spelling and grammar mistakes, and one false piece of information. It could have been longer though, too.
Alex did a Newspaper Article, the sentences were very long and they just kept going on like run on sentences. The picture fit the accident well, but there should of been more.
ReplyDeleteJoanay did a summary on Medusa. She had really good information that was clear to understand. I liked the part that said " goot funky" :D
Olivia did a Newspaper Article, the information was good, it felt like you were actually at the accident.
Amanda did a Newspaper Article too, there was good info and she had a nice title. I thought it was kinda funny what the witnesses said...
D.J. wrote a summary of Medusa. In the paragraphs there were some minor spelling and gramar mistakes. At points the information was very confusing.
Reeve - Newspaper Article - Kind of short and needed detail and more info
ReplyDeleteDJ - Medusa - It was sort of confusing and some was inaccurate, also there were spelling and grammar mistakes.
Santos - Newspaper Article - some careless mistakes :[ but also very creative, nice graphics, and amazing because it's by SANTOS!! :D
I did a Medusa summary and I liked it because I think that all of the stories about greek mythology are VERY interesting...
I did the Medusa paper, and learned a lot about her. I think all the stories about greek mythology are very interesting.
ReplyDelete(I wasn't here to read my classmates papers, but i'm sure they're all very good)